I think it's a poor review.
For example, he picks on the fact that it doesn't have variable valve timing and picks on the fact that the two sets of intake lobes can only hit one sweet spot, whilst promoting the Suzuki variable valve timing - whilst almost completely ignoring the fact that the benefit of flow due to the greater lift of the two stage system. That and the fact that the lower lift/duration lobes open the valves at slightly different times means a better combustion at lower rpm.
Or he he suggesting just about every other bike has a better solution with a single lift/duration inlet lobe/s?
He picks on the shift mechanism is operated by a solenoid, because it might fail - have any failed yet?
More laughably is the comment about the oil filler - you'd thought an intelligent person would realise that the screwdriver handle is moulded in the shape of the filler head and the spanner fits the screwdriver to provide the leverage required - there are only a few pcs to the tool kit and he can't work out what they're for?
Finally, why make an issue of the fact that standing on the pegs, the speedo can be obscured by the sat nav mount - bit of a daft comment really.